Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Mumbai

Aaj me manushya jaati chaa veglaach rang pahilaa. Mumbai madhey aayusha asach jagla jaata.


Kaal ratri ushira ghari pohochlyaa mule mala aaj officela nighaaylaa roj chya peksha jaast ushir jhala hota. Majhi nehmichi train aaj chukli hoti. Tari, mala ushir hou naye ani me velechyaa aat office la pohochaava ashi ichaa hoti. Me ‘jalad’ local madhey chadhley. Pan mala jithey utaraychey hote, tyachyaa aadhi don stations war gaadi thambnaar hoti. Me kashi-bashi train made chadhle hote. Daarat ‘latkat’ hote mhanayla harkat nahi. Pahila station-halt ala ani gaadi thambli. Me jyaa daarat ‘latakle’ hote, tyachya samorchyaa daara samor, platform ala hota. Gaadi ardhyahun jaast mokli zali hoti ata. Me daaratun aat pravesh karu shakat hote ata. Ani me kela.


Me jithlyaa daarachyaa bajula ubhi hote, tichech dusraa halt yenaar hotaa. Baaykanchi ek ol aadhich ubhi hoti. Mhanje ardhaa daar ‘block’ kela hota yaa ‘long distance’ janaryaa baaykanni. Tyanchyaa maagey jaagaa naslyaa mule, me dusri ol karun ubhi rahile. Ani haach RULE ahe, mhanun.

Ardha darwaajaa ajun hi moklaa hotaa, pudhchya halt chya lokkannaa chadhnyaasathi.



Halt number don ala. Baaykaa chadu laaglyaa. Majyaa haatanvar, tondavar, khaandyaavar…milel tikde, ek baai mala ‘maarat’ mage gheun geli. Me swatahala vaachavnyaachaa prayatna karat hote. tee nighun geli. Nanter dusri baai aali ani tiney hi tech karat mala punhaa maage nhele. Mala khup raag ala hota. Khup vaait hi vaatat hote. Me ordu laagle ki ‘tumhala kahi adhikar nahi kunala maarnyacha!’. Pan tyaa baaykaa aaplyaa maitreeninshi gappaa maarnyat gung zalya hotya. janu kahi jhalech navte! me dagadanshi bolat hote.



Ha tamasha evadya baaykanni pahila hota pan ek hi kahi bolli navti he pahun. The so called ’FIRST CLASS LADIES attitude’. Ekhadya chorala maarava tas ya baakaani eka nishpaap moolila maarla hota. Ani bakinni sudha fakt ughdya dolyanni pahila hota. Pan koni kahich bolla nahi.



Me badbad keli paach minta pan kahi faaydaa navtaa karan tya gappanmade gung hotya.



Mala khup vaait vaatat hote. Mala khup radu yet hote. Train madhun utarlyavar rickshaw made sudhe me radat hote. Mala he kalat navte ki kuni itlka ‘cruel’ kas vaagu shakta? Devane saglyaat shaani & sundar gost banavli- Manus. Pan Manusch maanuski visarla ahe.



Mumbai. Khup practical city maanli jaate. Aani tya baddal Mumbaikarann’aa garv hi aahe.

Pan ashi ‘practicality’ kaay upyogachi, jyat tumhi maanuski visrun gela ahat, jo maansacha mool dharma ahe?

4 comments:

Sadhana Ishwar said...

hi khari story ahe ka? (Mhanje tuza anubhav)
ki tu lihile ahes?

Likhan chan ..ghadalela prasang vait.

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wishdesire said...

yhatlaa shabd ni shabd kharaa aahey. Majhyaa barober asey ghadley kahi divsan purvi. It was a very painful experience. Tech shabdaat utravanyaa cha prayatna kelaay.

jyoti said...

he tar kahich nahi, byka mhanaje byka asatat, train madhe chadhtana kahi chimte kadhtat, tar kahi nakhane orbadtat, tar kahi hills che chappal ghalun payavar jor-jorat py detat. ani mi lamb veni ghalayache tevha venila dorkhanda samajun chadyachya tyala dharun. hich tar sushikshit bykancha olakh ahe.